Saturday, March 27, 2010

excerpt numero dos. (mi madre.)

My mother has always been extremely benign. Although she didn’t always show her gentle side, it was always there to mollify us when we were angry, scared, or nervous about something. She had such an astute way of making me feel better when supposed friends of mine had spread slander about me all over the church and showed their hypocrisy towards me. She always had a stratagem that I could use to get them back.

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1 comment:

  1. These all work, but try to use more detail to show that you know what they mean. This will help others and you when you review!

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